This blog post is about my twitterive and the reflections that my classmates have given me.
I had a lot of good feed back from my twitterive. I didn’t think it was good; I was very lost at times of what I should do next. Even though it was only five years ago the brain suppresses the bad memories. I do have to go through and add something’s that I have not had time to do so far. I still have the video and I was told to add conversations. I wanted to add the feedback I got on my blog post. I liked all of the feedback and thought it was very informative. Thanks Guys!
Sam Olenowski - Wow, just wow. I wish you had presented this because it is extremely emotional and I could never imagine. I think you had just the right amount of genres and although the dog and cat part was sooo sad I liked how the before after of your cat worked. I loved how the stairs out of words worked when but thought "I'm finally home" should be written upwards as opposed to down. The only thing I would add would be a conversation with someone in your family or a friend that conveys emotion because this is story is really inspirational.
Kaite Collins - twitterive was very powerful. I couldn't imagine losing everything I own, including my memories, from a house fire. To make matters worse, I am a huge animal lover. To lose pets in something that was completely unexpected must have been heart breaking. My heart goes out to you and your family. I love the obituary piece that you used for your animals. It gave us a view of how much your animals were loved in your family. Although your theme is your home and family, I feel it is also the idea of rebuilding your memories with your family in a new home. A lot, maybe even all, of your belongings were lost in the fire and as a family you try to create new memories that are worth remembering. I would like to see more photos of your family. I know that you may have lost a lot of pictures in your old home, but maybe you could show us recent photos. To add another genre, you could also use a "how-to-list." You could use this list to show how your family as recovered from this devastating fire.
Christie Johnson- Laura had the strongest twitterive in my opinion. I loved how I actually felt what she went through as her house burnt down. I was really touched by how she told the stories of her animals; I almost had a tear come to my eye. She used a variety of genres to tell her story. I like how she took screen shots of het tweets. She still wants to add a video of her walking through the rubble of her house, which I think will work well with her project. I think she’s on the right track and I don’t have anything to have her fix.
I had a lot of good feed back from my twitterive. I didn’t think it was good; I was very lost at times of what I should do next. Even though it was only five years ago the brain suppresses the bad memories. I do have to go through and add something’s that I have not had time to do so far. I still have the video and I was told to add conversations. I wanted to add the feedback I got on my blog post. I liked all of the feedback and thought it was very informative. Thanks Guys!
Sam Olenowski - Wow, just wow. I wish you had presented this because it is extremely emotional and I could never imagine. I think you had just the right amount of genres and although the dog and cat part was sooo sad I liked how the before after of your cat worked. I loved how the stairs out of words worked when but thought "I'm finally home" should be written upwards as opposed to down. The only thing I would add would be a conversation with someone in your family or a friend that conveys emotion because this is story is really inspirational.
Kaite Collins - twitterive was very powerful. I couldn't imagine losing everything I own, including my memories, from a house fire. To make matters worse, I am a huge animal lover. To lose pets in something that was completely unexpected must have been heart breaking. My heart goes out to you and your family. I love the obituary piece that you used for your animals. It gave us a view of how much your animals were loved in your family. Although your theme is your home and family, I feel it is also the idea of rebuilding your memories with your family in a new home. A lot, maybe even all, of your belongings were lost in the fire and as a family you try to create new memories that are worth remembering. I would like to see more photos of your family. I know that you may have lost a lot of pictures in your old home, but maybe you could show us recent photos. To add another genre, you could also use a "how-to-list." You could use this list to show how your family as recovered from this devastating fire.
Christie Johnson- Laura had the strongest twitterive in my opinion. I loved how I actually felt what she went through as her house burnt down. I was really touched by how she told the stories of her animals; I almost had a tear come to my eye. She used a variety of genres to tell her story. I like how she took screen shots of het tweets. She still wants to add a video of her walking through the rubble of her house, which I think will work well with her project. I think she’s on the right track and I don’t have anything to have her fix.
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